Example 2:
WWW: Good connotations. Good terminology.
EBI: Be more clear when explaining your points.
Example 3
WWW: Good terminology, important detail.
EBI: Make your points more clear.
Comparing my work:
I need to include more terminology to improve my overall mark. e.g lighting, miss-en-scene
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